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The tax collector had
an appetite for berry smoothies
and a secret love of robotic exchanges
between baristas and caffeine addicts.
An empty emptiness fanatic, 
who dreamed of giving
the girl at the bus stop
(with the quiet lip-syncing lips)
a daisy because by the way she
stared forlornly at the pigeons pecking
at nothing, he knew 
she liked simplicity
even more than him.
my writing is getting smaller and smaller.

and less and less significant.

one day it may disappear completely.
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flummo Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student Writer
I really like the last couple of lines. And it won't disappear as long as those of us who read it remember, and I know I will. :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :hug:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013   Writer
Hello, dropping you a line to tell you that I've 'borrowed' your wonderful title for title-poem called Valley of the Butterflies :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really nice work pulling the titles together. honored for mine to be included.


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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013   Writer
Thanks so much for the compliments! And your title is simply gorgeous :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ah, thank you very much. they are never very easy to come up with.
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Asahi-sensei Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
wah °-° 

Gravity, stop doing so much stupendous things. i can't just fav them all >< 

my oh my this should be the start of a book....
that girl at the bus stop, i love her already ♥
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, you're too kind, thank you :hug:

aw, I may consider writing a short story for this.
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Asahi-sensei Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
^^

oh yes, please do =D 
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fore-cite Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is the first piece of your work I found and I think it's wonderful. I hope your writing doesn't disappear completely I only just discovered you, but just because it's small in lines doesn't make it and less large in meaning or in brilliance. Just remember that. 
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